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제목을 rainy day예요

Today is rainy day.
I like rainy day.  My favorite weather is rainy day.

but loving rainy day isn't long time for me. (비를 좋아하게 된지는 오래되지 않았다를 이렇게 표현했는지 맞는지..요)

As i was kid, I always was envious someone who has mother who could bring a umbrella for her child
at rainy day to the school.
(내가 어릴때 학교에 우산을 가져다주는 엄마를 가진 아이를 항상 부러워했다)

At suddenly it was raining, I away used to came back home in the rain with having mind that been envious someone who has mother like that.
(갑자기 비가 오는 날에는 나는 항상 비를 맞으면 집으로 돌아와야했다. 우산을 가져다주는 엄마가 있는 친구를 부러워하며)

Suddenly it was raining, i did always the case (갑짜기 비가 오는 날에는 나는 항상 그랬다)

when I played outside, one of family member didnt find me even though mother though at late night.

so, I also was envious some child who was family who was worried about itself.
(그래서 나는 역시 자신을 걱정해주는 가족이 있는 아이를 부러워했다)

oneday I sttempted that didnt come back home at night.
At that day I slept my close friend house. I thought my mother and all of family member ould worry about me and would find me all night.  
I was OK if i  get a sharp scolding (나는 야단 맞아도 괜찮을 정도로 가족들의 관심을 확인하고 싶었다)

부탁드려요.....