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질문이 who is your heroe in life? 인데 제가 영작을 했는데 어색한 문장이 있나 봐주세요


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My Heroe is my husband in my life.

We met when I was university freshman.
He is not change anything when we met first time as now.(그는 처음 만났을때나 지금이나 변함이 없다)
He always respect my opition and been care around  people (주위사람).

i was big impressed from him two thing.

one thing is

one day he said to me about his future.
that time we aren't couple. just have a date.
maybe we met two or three time.

he said to me how he live and what he would be in the future.
and how he will try to be like this.그렇게 되기 위해서는 무엇을 할것인가에
that time i was only nineteen years old. i didnt think of my future as him.
so i was surprised and he was looked difference before. (다른게 보였다)
and i occured truth to him.

and another thing is his attitude about his father.
his father was driver. his father havent  learned a lot.  but 열심히 가족을 부양했다.

he was knew that his father was done. and he respected his father.
그는 그의 아버지의 한일를 알아보고 비록 많이 배우지는 못한 분이지만 존경했다.
i respected him like him (나는 그런 그가 존경스러웠다)

until now(지금까지)
he have was same.
자기 관리를 잘하면 주위사람을 배려한다.

지금 내가 있을 수 있는건 나를 믿어주고 나를 배려해주는 그가 있어서 가능했다.

My husband is really my heroe.

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긴 글인데,
어색하고 어떻게 표현해야할지 모르겠는 부분이 많이 있어요.
영어고수님들 부탁드려요.
내일 아마도 발표해야할것 같아요...

[코스코]

My husband is my hero in life.
My hero in life is my husband.

We met when I was a freshman in college.
He hasn't changed a bit since we first met.

He always respects my opition
He is kind and careing to people around him.

There were two things that impressed me about him.

First was...

One day he told me about his future plans.
At that time we were not a official couple.
We were just dating, maybe we met two or three time.
We were just dating, we might have had 2 or 3 dates.

He told me about how he would like to live, what he wants to acomplish the future, and how he plans to achieve his goals.
He was only 19.
We were still so young.
I did not have my future planned out like he had.
I was surprised to hear of all his dreams.
From there on I saw him in different light. (다르게 보였는데 어떻게 보였다는건가요? 자랑스러웠다? 어른스러웠다... 어떻게 다르게 보였는지를 쓰는게 좋을것 같아요
He achived his goal, so far...

Second thing that impressed me about him was his attitude toward his father.
His father was driver.
He was not a well educated man, but always worked hard to support his family.
My husband appreciated all that his father had to do for the family and respected him for that.

His kind character hasnt changed a bit.
Even now, my husband cares for others just as much as he cares for himself.
(말이 조금 이상한거 같아요...ㅎㅎㅎ)

I am where I am now because I have someone who believes in me and supports me, my husband.

My husband is my real heroe.

[english]

코스코님, 정말 고마워요...^^

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