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[영작]

하지만 그것 때문에 동물멸종이 가속되고 있다.

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but, extermination of animal is getting more(faster) because of it.

[...]

However, the endangered species are getting more and more because of it.

[....]

However, that has caused animals to be in extinct in an accelerating rate.

[호안석]

작문은 역시 어려워요...... 특히 영어는 더 어려워요... 아무튼 이명박식 영어는 나빠요.

[정]

It accelerates, however, the extinction of endangered species.

[but]

but(문맥에 따라 on the other hand, however 등..) that expedites the extermination of the species (or the extermination of animals)

[원글]

답 주신 분들 감사합니다.