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[재탕이지만;]

어제 아침시간에 올렸더니 한 분만 리플을 달아주셔서...
밤시간에 올리면 쫌 더 많은 조언해주시지 않을까 해서 다시 올립니다.
같은 글 지겨우셔도 너그러이 봐주세요 ㅠㅠ

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학교 졸업한지도 백만년 지났는데 간만에 영어 쓸 일이 생겼어요.
제 꺼면 대충 하겠는데 제가 신세 많이 진 분이 서양사돈한테 보내실 거라
웬만하면 안 틀렸으면 해서 여기에 문의드려요.
영어의 여신님들 그냥 지나치지 마시고 지적 좀 해주시면 너무 감사하겠습니다 ㅠ0ㅠ

Dear 사돈부부 이름,
With the help of lots of friends, we were able to stand the sad times.
                                 어머니의 장례식을 무사히 치루었습니다.

We do appreciate your warm and kind words of comfort.
위로의 편지 매우 감사합니다.                                

Now the winter is beginnig here, it's getting colder day by day.
We heard it is already snowing a lot in there.
(날씨는 쫌 뜬금없어보이는데 원문에 있어서요)

You must be very worried while your child is far away from home.
                                      자식을 멀리 타국에 보내놓고

사위이름 and 딸이름 are doing fine, they are all our precious children.

Please do not worry we'll be taking good care of them.

We always pray for 두 분 건강 잘 챙기시고 언제나 행복한 나날이 되시길

P.S: We will be very honored 어머님 건강이 허락될 때 한국에 한 번 오시면?

[도움이 되기를..]

Dear 바깥사돈 and 안사돈 (성씨를 빼고),

With the help of friends and family, we were able to have a graceful memorial service for mother. Thank you sincerely for sharing our sorrow. It meant a lot to us to know that your thoughts were with us in our loss. Your kind expression of sympathy will always be remembered; it not only expressed your love, support, and understanding to the family, but it also made us realize how much our family and friends mean to us during a time like this. You will be part of our emotional strength to get through the days ahead as we think of mother and miss her.

It is getting colder here by the day now that winder has begun. We heard it started to snow a lot there. With your child living in foreign country, I can only imagine how much you would miss 사위이름 and 딸이름 and worry about them. They are both very precious to us. We try our best all the time to take good care of them.

We will be very honored if you pay us a visit someday when 안사돈 recovers her health. We pray for you all the time. May the lord’s blessing be with your family.

With deepest appreciation,


보내는 분 성함

[지나가다]

윗분(도움이 되기를..)께서 잘해주신것 같아요 ^^

근데 두번째 문단(날씨가 점점 추워지고)에 오타가 하나 있는듯 해서.. winter 를 winder로 오타 치신것
같아서 적어놓고 갑니다~

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