Our family went Saipan at april.
Our family canoe at ocean and we saw ray strange fish
I was scard so I couldn't snorkeling .
Managaha Island sea color was cool w
We caught sea cucumber.
Mom sad "It creepy"
Saipan food was not good .
Korean food was great.
I want to go Saipan one more time.
미리 감사합니다
학원 숙제인가요? 선생님이 틀린거 고쳐주지 않나요?
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Our family went to Saipan in April.
Our family canoed in the ocean and we saw ray, a strange fish.
I was scard so I couldn't do snorkeling .
In Managaha Island, the sea's color was cool.
We caught sea cucumbers.
Mom said, "It's creepy"
Saipan's food was not good .
Korean food was great.
I want to go to Saipan one more time.
몇살인지 모르겠지만 영작을 잘하네요
단어를 종종 빼먹기는 하지만 문장구조를 잘 짜는것같아요
Our family 보다는 My family 나을 것 같아요
감사합니다.
사학년요ㅜㅜ
돌이켜보면 저는 고등학교때까지도 저렇게 영작을 못했어요.
요즘 아이들이 영어를 잘하기는 하나봐요.
많이 칭찬해주고 격려해주세요.
저도 같은 또래 아이가 있어서요. 귀엽네요.
ㅇㅇ님이 고쳐주신 거에서..
Scard -> scared
Korean food is great. (과거에만 맛있었던 게 아니라 현재도 맛나다는 의미라면..)