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Hello, I am kim, ki so. I am in the fourth grade

I explain for my dream.

When I was young, i have a dream to be a fashiondesigners, Because fashiondesigners, looks very beautiful.

But I changed my dream, whenI was grow up  I watched TV to see an Africa life, oh my god

It is very terrible, really

An Africans suffer from poverty.  아프리카 사람들은 빈곤에 허덕이고 있습니다.

It is pity so  cried

I think `can I help there? so I think up serve for nothing.

And I decide, I want ti be a good doctor.

But did away that my dream...... .

Because I read book and like book, But I don1t like study

When parents scole me,

I`me outwardly light......

But I`m very afraid.

Because of I drift apart looks like my dream relation that
그것 때문에 제가 꿈과의 관계가 점점 멀어지는 것 같기도 합니다.

I wash my dream really

This afraid, I think I would rather my wish isn`t doctor.

But she stuck it out through the hard time thanks to my a close friend.

Thanks to my a close friend keep my dream

Thanks you for lishtening to my story.

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