염치불구하고..(수정)

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다시 올립니다
제가 대강 한건데 수정 좀 봐주시면 진심으로 감사드리겠습니다(__)(__)

1. I have known her for six years.

   She was one of the student in my department

2. 만약 당신의 가족이 이 사람에게 상담받을 경우가 생기면 그러꺼냐는 질문에
   제가  yes 라고 했고, 그이유는...

   The reason is that she was warm, kind always consider another person.

    She has talent of make people laugh and amuse who is talking with her.

3. While I was teaching her, I have watched that she was doing her best effort for
    
   her goal.  She was one of the most promissing and outstanding students.
  
   As I as far remember  she was diligent and very quick to pick  things up

   developed herself  through various performance .

   I belive she would be a good counselor after graduation.

   제 나름나로 해봤는데 많이 미숙하죠?
  
   답글  기다립니다...

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그냥 훑어만 봤습니다. 단수, 복수, 시제가 안 맞는 곳이 보입니다.

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지적 좀 해 주시면 안될까요? 흑흑

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She was one of my students. I answered yes because she is a very warm person, always nice to others. She has talent of making people laugh and feel very comfortable around her.
While I was teaching her, I noticed that she was making her best efforts to achieve her goals. She is one of the most promising and outstanding students of mine. She is very hardworking and very quick to learn new stuff. She tried to make herself better all the time.
I believe she will make an excellent counselor after she graduates.

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