초등 영어몇문장 봐주실수 있나요.

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My name is KJ
the first grade of KJ elementary school ( 학교이름을 저기 넣는게 맞나요)
I likes to take care of animals.
I want to become a veterinarian
Appeared to be glad to I will work hard


일부 지웁니다.

[조금만]

I am a first grader at kj elementary school. 또는 i am in first grade at kj elementary school.

I like to take care of animals.

I am glad to be here and I will do my best.

[조금만]

I want to be a veterinarian when I grow up. 위에 내가 크면이란 말이 없길래 더했어요.

[원글]

정말 감사합니다 큰 도움이 되었습니다!