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Write about a person who has been very important to you in your life. Who is the person, and why has he or she been very important to you?
Who is your mentor in your life? Who is the most vital and treasure to you? Everyone has a important people in their lives. In my case, My parents are most vital people in my life of course. But, My high school teacher also very important person in my life. When I was a high school student, she was a my homeroom teacher. My teacher always cheer me up and motivate me to study so hard and help me get hope and passion. last year, I sent story about my teacher and song request to the radio station. And the story about my teacher was aired on Radio. Because she always concerned for me, I appreciate his interest. Also, thanks to my teacher, I could overcome difficulties that I had when I was a high school student.
One of the most difficult obstacle that I could overcome thanks to my teacher was the fact that I liked singers severely. Since I was 17, TVXQ was my favorite singing group. Although I was a student preparing for the College Scholatic Ability Test, I hardly studied and I always listened to their songs, bought their CD albums and went to their concerts. Also, Thinking of famous stars "TVXQ" hindered me of making decisions rationally. So, the result of an examination was drastically low. In these circumstances, my teacher helped me conqesting problem and advised about my problem. Therefore, as I respect homeroom teacher intensely, I tried not to listen TVXQ's music and not to think of them. Thereupon, I was enthusiastic about studying, and I could get over my obstacle because of my benefactor. Also, I didn't aspire to TVXQ any more and thinking of TVXQ faded away in my head. So, I totally overcame my obstacle.
Second obstacle that I could overcome thanks to my teacher was the fact that my English skills are very poor. My teacher also helped me raise my grades by making me become a very diligent student. In my case, I had difficulty in studying English. Since I was young, I had been poor at English skills. Because I was not interested in English and didn’t try to study English, My English scores are very low and terrible. So, I was really ashamed of myself and felt stressful. But, because my teacher is a English teacher and we are very intimate in special, she always worried about my obstacle and helped me studying hard like my family, And, gradually I was attached to her. therefore, I studied very hard to show my ability and live up to teacher's expectations. So, I think that I got over English skills gradually in some degree thanks to my teacher's help.
Decisively, thanks to my teacher, I could achieve and come true my dream. Because my homeroom teacher graduated from Ewha, my goal was entering Ewha Womans University when I was a high school student. fortunately, I was admitted Ewha Womans University before the College Scholatic Ability Test. I was admitted due to an essay test and the high school records. The fact that I tried to achieve my dream was totally because of my teacher. Without my teacher, I never couldn't have dream.
In conclusion, because my high school teacher has been very important to me in my life, until now, I have been respecting my teacher. And, whenever I feel sad and have difficulty in something to do, I think her and her love to me. Then, My feeling becomes better and feel happy. And, I feel reassured knowing that she will help me. Because my teacher is very vital person, I think that I'm a very lucky woman and, I will always appreciate my teacher during my life. Therefore, After I succeed at all costs, I will repay her kindness and, I also want to be a important person to her in her life.